~ I am sooooo HAPPY!! ~
I got my grade back on my 3 page school paper. This was my first assignment, here is my grade and teacher comment. {{I was trying to be all fancy with pretty cursive font}}
Grades for BUS105-90 : Business and Society
Instructor: Jesus Zamora
Unit 1 Individual ProjectMoore, Patricia
113 Class Average
95
Grade Comments
Patricia,Good posting. There is some room for improvement. For example, do not use fancy fonts. Limit yourself to using Arial or Times News Romas, size 10 or 12.
Also, the Bibliography was incorrect.
The correct listing should have been:
Ebert, R.J., & Griffin, R.W. (2005). Business Essentials (5th ed.).
Upper Saddle River: Pearson Prentice Hall.
Your grade was calculated as follows:
0.00% Late Submission
0.00% Spelling and Grammar Errors
0.00% Use of Inappropriate Language
5.00% Lack of support for your arguments using credible references (APA Citations) or APA Citations were incorrect
2.50% Did not format document according to List of Expectations' guidelines
2.50% Did not provide a Bibliography or Bibliography was incorrect
0.00% Did not provide a description of the retail store you will open
0.00% Did not provide a summary of the competition and explanation of how your store will differentiate itself from the competition.
0.00% Did not provide a description of the retail store you will open
0.00% Did not provide a summary of the demand for your product(s) in this location. Why will your business be successful?
The blue highlighted areas are what where marked off of my grade. I must try harder to be more bland! LOL
I am so PROUD of myself!
